文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
From: Wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date : December 23 rd, 2008 To: sales-department@@hotmail.com Subject: Check the product list Dear Mr. Johnson, We have to December 23 rd December 23 rd your company 3000 pieces product,But According to our signing of the No.35 order,Product quantity should be 3500 pieces,We still not yet received another 500 items,Please check your product list,We are looking forward to your early reply! Best wishes Wang Haiyang