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希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。
From: Wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date : December 23 rd, 2008 To: sales-department@@hotmail.com Subject: Check the product list Dear Mr. Johnson, We have received the 3,000 products from your company on December 22nd, 2008, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the number of products should be 3,500, the other 500 products we have not received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours faithfully, Wang Hai yang
