从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
The China′s environmental policy are prove to be defeated,the government have no choice but to use some kinds of knowledge and evidence and adopt some effective measures to resolve it. Environmentally aware for the country or individual,s deed is the necessary element for the implementation of the policy Firstly, after the reform and opening-up, with the fast development of China's economy and technology which boosts need for coal as major renewable, coal releases 50 percent more carbon dioxide which contribute to environmental degradation.Thereforce,In 2014, China also promulgated policies about the reduction of carbon dioxide of 45% to mitigate environmental problems. The numbers from the report as clear evidence showed reaching a peak by 2040.In 2016,central government is intended to supplement this policy though more comprehensive and diversified policy to perfect it.