有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。
Secondly, it is very clear that heavy industry gradually transferred to western regions which habitat destruction. In the first half of this year, some efficient data from the authoritative data through representation, although coal resources would decline, working in work everything to combat pollution to acquire the good surroundings. Also, the central government is trying to let the public integrate into the community even society maybe just does some little things reducing carbon emissions. Such as the citizens use virtual environments knowledge which means played a part in their life of the community.