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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

用户练习作文:

The picture mainly says that a father and a mother sent an e-mail to their son,they communicate on the internet. As far as I am concerned,electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.There are three reasons for why I think electronic communication can repplace face-to-face contact.Firstly,it is very convenient for us to communicate with each other on the internet,no matter how far we have,it just have few seconds.Secondly,we can see each other on the video,it can reduce our homesick.Thirdly,although we can't hug our parents,but we can through the internet to commmunicate with our parents to realize their sutiations.sometimes we must go out to work or study ,this which we have no choice ,we can't stay with our parents together ,it's the best way we can chat with our parents by the internet.

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