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To:All the students in the department From:Chief Director,Zhang Wei Date:August 16,2014 Subject:Information for the coming investigation The students of the History Department will conduct an investigation in Wangjia Village,Miyun District,from September 1 to 22.We are going to inspect the local farm mechanization so that we can have a better understanding of their past and present.Through the investigation,we may make our contribution to the development of the village by using what we have learned in the university. Since it is getting cold,we holp that the students will carry some warm clothes with themselves.Besides,take with you other daily necessities.Further suggestions will be appreciated so that a fruitful investigation will be guaranteed.