2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法基础较为扎实；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

Take the cumulative fines as an example.In the light of data promulgated the central government as the clear evidence, in the first half of the year of the newest policies putting into effect in 2014 which there are nearly 500 cases of “accumulative fines the equivalent of 4.4 billion yuan which implies each of the cases relates to 900000 in penalties, compare to the past, exceeds the caps is 400000. Similar conditions apply to other policies that policy had a specific intent in order that enforcement the agencies to implement management to increase the effectiveness of the administrative amerces achieved.but just penalties for switching grew stiffer rather than use new and effective knowledge and evidence to improve the environment.