英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 初中> 中考英语> 真题> 2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:2060
要求:
根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
提示:
1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
__________________________________
 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
用户的作文(系统评分87.0分
评语:

作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者在句法层面做的很棒;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

Secondly, it is very clear that heavy industry gradually transferred to western regions which habitat destruction. In the first half of this year, some efficient data from the authoritative data through representation, although coal resources would decline, working in work everything to combat pollution to acquire the good surroundings. Also, the central government is trying to let the public integrate into the community even society maybe just does some little things reducing carbon emissions. Such as the citizens use virtual environments knowledge which means played a part in their life of the community.其次,它isvery清楚重工业逐渐转移到西部地区生态环境的破坏。今年上半年,一些有效的数据从权威数据通过表示,虽然煤炭资源会减少,在对抗污染的一切获得良好的工作环境。同时,中央政府正试图让公众融入社区甚至社会也许只是做一些小事减少碳排放。所以公民使用虚拟环境知识这意味着参与他们的生活社区 风险是如此严重,我们别无选择,只能采取一些有效的措施来解决它。环保意识对国家和个人的行为是必要元素的实现策略。Furthermore, Official accountability as the critical element is intended to analyse the government feedback from the public. Due to Chinese officials cannot take the lead to improve the environment, in other ways, although the policy has already drawn up, these leaders lack to initiative and enthusiasm to accept the environmental knowledge and improve ambient. Through he mass media, a variety of communications facilities and communications technology make the public in a short time to get in reality, completely and effectively data and details. In some extreme cases,citizens expressed their dissatisfaction through protests which have for the most part been held peacefully which force to strengthen the government. The central government need to invest manpower and financial resources and time to control the environment. Some scholars claimed that the for construction and evaluation of an environmental quality of the city need the government cost much money for it. In addition, some recent analyses suggest that education is central to the development of the nation which let the children have more of a chance to learn about environmental protection knowledge to improve awareness and skill for environment precaution continuously as the fundamental process to protect the environment even eliminate future environmental problems. Firstly, the National People’s Congress develops detailed policies and regulations for the environment to ensure that the stipulates had been implemented..

会员评论0个评论)
christibei
金币:2251

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:55.5catdog1736

人气:49发布:2016-02-01

得分:52.5kekeaa

人气:38发布:2016-04-04

得分:52.520011004

人气:33发布:2016-06-05

得分:50.5Alr

人气:31发布:2016-06-25

得分:47.0Allan李

人气:51发布:2017-07-16