作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;文章层次较为清晰。
The central government needs to invest manpower and financial resources and time to control the environment. Some scholars claimed that the for construction and evaluation of an environmental quality of the city need the government cost much money for it. In addition, some recent analyses suggest that education is central to the development of the nation which let the children have more of a chance to learn about environmental protection knowledge to improve awareness and skill for environment precaution continuously as the fundamental process to protect the environment even eliminate future environmental problems.