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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12895
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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According to the picture,we clearly learn that the parents can't constantly see their children.The account isn't busy instead the man is lost in computer and stay at his bedroom.Which reveals nowadays young people more rely on computer and lack of fact-to-face contact. As we all know, with the development of technology,advanced device have more and more functions.They make our life become convenient,fast and interested.However,every cion has two sides.Some people start being addicted to computer and ignore face-to-face contact.They think that electronic communication is convenient and improve efficiency.In my opinions, electronic communication onlt is used to chat and is bad to promote relation with friends and parents.Everything should have a limitation ,or you will get a opposite result.Therefore,face-to-face can't replaced electronic communication. In conclusion,the relationship is supported by computer is weak. If you want to improve it,face-to-face would be more efficient.

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