2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

With the development of sociaty ,computer have playing an more and more importent role in our daily life.It is no doult that computer and man connect relatively.In one hand some people hold the view that computer make for the lazy of man.In other hand some people support the idea that computer is the best helper of human.In my eyes, computer is the best helper of human ,we can not live modern life without computer. Computer make the comunication with each other convenient.Whatever we go ,we can contact our families and friends by computer.If you chose to study far away from home,you can take advantage of computer and tell your parents how youmiss them.Even you can depend on computer to comunicate to strangers. Computer will help you to get all kinds of information quickly.We are chinese and live in china,but we are able to know how is the america gong on,for computer is powerful to connect information around the world . As we all know, computer has beening expressed our today's life efficiently.