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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮；作者词汇表达较丰富，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
From the picture we can see that the parents expect their child's computer crashes so that they can see him. And the ironic thing is that the boy just at upstairs in their home, which is pathetically for parents and undoubtelly considered controversial or even unreasonable. Living in an thechnology age we can do a large amounts of things convinently, such as online shopping, senting Emails, but the Internet can not replace everying. To begin with, We are nature people so it is necessayr fo us to communicate with others instead of always onling chatting. In addition, electronic world is a virtual world, we need to feel the real world by ourselves. To sum up, it is unwise to do anything relay on Internet especially for teenagers. Do not be addicted to Internet, face to face contact is the communication which include love.
