Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
From the picture we can see that the parents expect their child's computer crashes so that they can see him. And the ironic thing is that the boy just at upstairs in their home, which is pathetically for parents and undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable. Living in a thechnology age we can do a large mounts of thing convinently, such as online shopping, senting Emails, but the Internet can not replace everying. To begin with, We are nature people so it is necessay fo us to communicate with others instead of always online chatting. In addition, electronic world is a virtual world. We need to feel the real world by ourselves. To sum up, it is unwise to do anything relaying on Internet especially for teenagers. Not be addicted to Internet, face to face contact is the communication which include love.