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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
From the picture we can see that the parents expect their child's computer crashes so that they can see him. And the ironic thing is that the boy just at upstairs in their home, which is pathetically for parents and undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable. Living in a technology age we can do a large mounts of thing conveniently, such as online shopping, senting Emails, but the Internet can not replace everything. To begin with, we are nature people so it is necessary fo us to communicate with others instead of always online chatting. In addition, electronic world is a virtual world. We need to feel the real world by ourselves. To sum up, it is unwise to do anything relaying on Internet especially for teenagers. Not be addicted to Internet, face to face contact is the communication which includes love.
