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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17591
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者能较多样地使用词汇,高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

Personally,I agree the statement that snap judgements can never be trusted.Firstly,snap judgements are usually made under an unnatural and hasty circumstance,it is not reliable for it is usually without deep thoughts.For example,we can not tell a person whether he is a good man by the first impression or judge a book by its appearance,which all need time to improve. Secondly,snap judgement leads to negative impacts.To aviod it,we'd better not to trust it.when it comes to the contract registration between two corporations,a snap judgement may lead to a huge loss for both of them.As a doctor,if he not to analyze the sympotom of the patients,and makes a snap judgement,the patient may die.In a word,I hold that snap judgements can never be trusted.

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