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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
Dear John: I am Tom Smith from sales dept of Fox Electronic Company, can you come here on the date of 20th, of June to discuss the launch date fo the new product and the advertising campaign. we are looking for establish business relationships with you in future . thank you for your quickly reply
