拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
From: Tomsmith@hotmail.com To: John@ 163.com Date: June 10th Subject: our meeting Dear Mr. Driscoll, I’m the general manager of Sales Department in Fox Electronic Company. I’m honored on behalf of our company to inform you that our meeting is scheduled on June 20th. The launch date of the new product and advertising campaign will be discussed then. Please let me know if this would be convenient for you or contact me to offer your arrangement. Wish to establish long-term cooperative relationship with you. Best regards,