2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；层次欠清晰；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用。

A strong will plays a vital role in the road to success.When it comes to the process that people did their utmost to succeed,they would feel emotional.Indeed,with many troubles in the way,some of people lacking a strong will failed in the half of road. Only people have a strong will,can they accomplish the great and significant missions.If someone without a strong will wants to get into the gate towards success,it probably would fail.Although it is too difficult for us to keep it all the time,we still can't gave up. Anyone should take a strong will for persuiting their own dreams,especially students.Students also should insist on doing everything that they determined to finish,not only studies,but also the life.Trying our best on things what we want to do,I am sure,we will gain many things.