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if my foreign friend is gonging to visit me ,I will take him or her to zhangjiajie,which is a nearly perfect place to enjoy and to relax. There are several reasons accounting for my selection.TO be the first ,zhangjiajie has really beautiful sightinng points,which could behalf the classical beauty in china.To be the second,compaired to others scenics,it is so quiet that simply like you sleep in a room with aircondition in hot summer.Traveling with quiet and calm is a key.what's more,zhangjiajie has been listed in "the top ten international protect scenic",it's not only enphasis it occupies a great important position in world's sight points,but also shows its own attraction completely. Above all,what is the most place I will introduce to my forein friend is zhangjiajie.I do bet she or he will love it.
