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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9041
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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高级词汇使用比较准确,但文中拼写错误稍多;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮。

用户练习作文:

With the rapidly develope of internet,more and more functions are attached on the internet,including learning on internet.Evey coin has two sides,the popular learning access is also faced with controversy. First of all,thre is no doubt that internet does much good to learning.It provides the instant information from all over the world,which ventruely broaden oue sights.At the same time,however,it still makes lots of side effects on us,such as less automy on learning.From my perspective,the side effects have nearly caught up with its benefits.learning is not simply to obtain information negatively,without the spirit of seeking for knowledge ang creating,we now have no phones something,we can not make process in future. Above all,we must clear the impacts from internet and adjust our time to enrich ourselves.

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