作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
In order to enhance our teacher and students' interesting on China Spaceflight. We are so honour invited Mr. LI Bo professor to make a lecture to us. The lecture would be hold in Jan. 5th. Thursday 2:30 PM, at school's hall. Mr. LI will introduce the background, precise process, of China Spaceflight development; and astronaut's condition.