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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71640
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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可增加从句和复杂句的使用;高级词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;文中衔接词丰富。

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China takes the task seriously that build a social cutural environment with gender equality and a natural environment with healthy and safety. Therefore, in order to creat a great social condition for women’ s subsistence and development, government appeal the kind of family style that is full of equality and harmony. In the social cutural cultivation, ecological environment protection and the family style construction, the role of woman become more and more important day by day. We need to creat such kind of country where the gender equality is promoted and the women should be respected. Through advocacy, coversazione, education cultivation and other ways, the Government department, Women’ s fedration,and other organizations preached about the basic policy of gender equality as much as possible to enhance social gender consciousness. As the major campaign manager, the government offices have shown that they decide to promote gender equality by publishing the signed article and making special report. Aiming to prohibit discrimination, they made a series of polices on culture and media to the coordinated development between men and women.

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