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China takes the task seriously that build a social cutural environment with gender equality and a natural environment with healthy and safety. Therefore, in order to creat a great social condition for women’ s subsistence and development, government appeal the kind of family style that is full of equality and harmony. In the social cutural cultivation, ecological environment protection and the family style construction, the role of woman become more and more important day by day. We need to creat such kind of country where the gender equality is promoted and the women should be respected. Through advocacy, coversazione, education cultivation and other ways, the Government department, Women’ s fedration,and other organizations preached about the basic policy of gender equality as much as possible to enhance social gender consciousness. As the major campaign manager, the government offices have shown that they decide to promote gender equality by publishing the signed article and making special report. Aiming to prohibit discrimination, they made a series of polices on culture and media to the coordinated development between men and women.