2000年考研英语作文真题:世界商业捕鱼

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We can see it from the picture that there are lots of fishes gathering in crowds in the sea with only one boat in 1900 But when in 1995 the situation is on the contrary group of boats on the sea with only one fish The enormous comparison makes us realise that fishing is already out of control it has greatly harm the fishing resources Under this situation the government should take measures to conserve the fishing industry with limiting the size of fishing net the frequency of fishing and so on The most important is that people should be told if they want to fishing from now on they must understand the significance of potecting fishing resouce