2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am from ChiZhou AnHui.So for me ,fron my point of view ,what the most beautiful city is my hometown.What I want to introduce the most amazing place to you is JiHuaMountain.It is a place that people want to visit.The character of the mountian is high .The secenry of it is wonderful ,there are many cute animal playing.