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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。
From: hubin@163.com Date: Dec,16th To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject: To establish business relationship Dear Sir or Madam, I realised that your new product of the number of 5670 during holding the exhibit in the New York Dec 15th to 22th.I was very interested in it.Please send us a price list and instruction.Thank you for your attendtion and we can establish business relationship each other. I am looking forword your reply. Hubin
