2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加从句和长句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

The first thing I want to do is to travel to QingDao seeing the sea,buying some seashells. and I want to spend the night in the hotel with my little baby eating some snacks ,watching some cartoons . I had planned this travel so long. I promised my baby I would take him to travel to the seaside, so I must keep it. The second thing I want to do is to improve my spoken English . I want to read two English books ,and I want to join some English clubs or English corners . Besides ,I would spend some time with my friends watching movies in the theater. That's all .Thank you .