2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

The first thing I want to do is to travel to QingDao seeing the sea,buying some seashells. Besides, I want to spend the night in the hotel with my little baby eating some snacks, watching some cartoons . I had desired this travel so long. I promised my baby I would take him to travel to the seaside, so I must keep it. The second thing I want to do is to improve my spoken English . I want to read some original English books ,and I want to join some English clubs or English corners . Except that ,I would spend some time with my friends watching movies in the theater. That's all .Thank you .