2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

The first thing I want to do is to travel to QingDao seeing some marine animals,including lobsters and sea lions . In the meanwhile , I would buy some seashells and special pearl neclaces, Besides, I want to spend the night in the hotel with my little baby eating some snacks, watching some cartoons . I had desired this travel so long. I promised my baby I would take him to travel to the seaside, so I must keep it. The second thing I want to do is to improve my spoken English . I want to read some original English books ,and I want to join some English clubs or English corners . Except that, I would spend some time with my friends watching movies in the theater. That's all .Thank you .