2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

The first thing I want to do is to travel to QingDao seeing some marine animals,including lobsters and sea lions . In the meanwhile , I would buy some seashells and pearl necklaces. Besides, I want to spend the night with my little baby in the hotel eating some snacks, watching some cartoons . I had desired this travel so long. I promised my baby I would take him to travel to the seaside, so I must keep it. The second thing I want to do is to improve my spoken English . I want to read some original English books ,and I want to join some English clubs or English corners . Except that, I would pay a visit to some friends and relatives . I would watch several movies with my husband in the theater. That's all .Thank you .