2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the development of society,computer has playing an increasingly more important role in our daily life.There is no doubt that computer and man connect relatively.On the one hand ,some people hold the view that computer led to the laziness of man.On the other hand,some people support the idea that computer is the best helper of human.In my eyes, computer is the best helper of human,we cannot live modern life without the computer. Computer contribute to the communication with each other convenient.Whatever we go,we can contact our families and friends through the computer.If you chose to study far away from home,you can take advantage of computer and tell your parents how you miss them.Even you can depend on computer to communicate to strangers. Computer will help you to get all kinds of information quickly.We are chinese and live in china,but we are able to know how is the america gong on,for computer is powerful to connect information around the world . As we all know, computer has been improved our today's life efficiently.