2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦84:中学生健康情况调查

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

Dear As we all know, health is very important. But how to keep fit? In my opinion, firstly , we should have a good diet. Eating fresh fruit and vegetables. There's an old saying goes " A mouth catches a flies". It's a good for us to keep good body. Secondly, I think doing more exercises also plays an important role. You can run, walk,swimming and so on. Thirdly, We can learn to relax our bodies. Like listening to light music, read books and chat with our families and friends to keep good moods. In a word, let's pay attention and do it from now on.