2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇量稍小;从句和复杂句用的不错,但部分句子还有一些小问题。
We protest against the discrimination that the women’ s independent personality is cut down and denied so that the government should monitor the news media and advertisement business operator of self-discipline,moreover,the media’s regulatory need to be improved. Indeed, the media industry need to be guided and managed in the right side; the media worker need to be cultivated; the social gender consciousness need to be enhanced.