2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇量稍小;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
We protest against the discrimination which the women’ s independent personality is cut down and denied. Hence, the government should monitor the news media and advertisement business operator of self-discipline,moreover,the media’s regulatory need to be improved. Indeed, the media industry should be guided and managed in the right side; the media worker ought to be cultivated; the social gender consciousness need to be enhanced.