2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;可适当增加几条从句。
We protest against the discrimination that the women’ s independent personality is cut down and denied. Hence, the government should monitor the news media and advertisement business operator of self-discipline,moreover,the media’s regulatory need to be improved. Indeed, the media industry should be guided and managed in the right side; the media worker ought to be cultivated; the social gender consciousness need to be enhanced. Until the end of 2014, the proportion of female news reporters who have the Press card was 44.1%