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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。
We protest against the discrimination that the women’ s independent personality is cut down and denied. Hence, the government should monitor the news media and advertisement business operator of self-discipline，moreover，the media’s regulatory need to be improved. Indeed, the media industry should be guided and managed in the right side; the media worker need to be cultivated; the social gender consciousness ought to be enhanced. Until the end of 2014, the proportion of female news reporters who have the Press card was 44.1% , which means women have played an important role in the field of media.
