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2.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 词数100左右
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；可适当增加从句的使用。
We protest against the discrimination that the women’ s independent personality is cut down and denied. Hence, the government should monitor the news media and advertisement business operator of self-discipline，moreover，the media’s regulatory need to be improved. Indeed, the media industry should be guided and managed in the right side; the media worker ought to be cultivated; the social gender consciousness need to be enhanced. They trumpeted that women make positive contribution in the development of economic society. Until the end of 2014, the proportion of female news reporters who have the Press card was 44.1% , which means women have played an important role in the field of media.
