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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦165:说出你的烦恼

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:08浏览次数:1927
要求:
最近学校进行了“说出你的烦恼”的调查,请你用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.50%学生认为作业多、压力大;
2.30%的学生认为父母要求严、相互沟通少;
3.20%的学生认为活动少、体质差;
4.说说解决的方法和措施。
要求:
1.句子通顺,表达准确,可适当增加细节使内容连贯;

2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右


Our school has made a survey -----“Don’t keep your worries ”.Here are the results.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

用户的作文(系统评分88.0分
评语:

文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

China takes the task seriously that build a sociocultural environment with gender equality and a natural environment with health and safety. Therefore, in order to create a favorable social condition for women’ s subsistence and development, government appeal the kind of family style that is full of equality and harmony. In the social cultural cultivation, ecological environment protection and the family tradition construction, the role of women are more and more important day by day. We need to create such a kind of country where the gender equality is promoted and the women should be respected. Through advocacy, conversazione, education cultivation and other ways, the Government department, Women’ s Federation, and other organizations preached about the basic policy of gender equality as much as possible to enhance social gender consciousness. As the major campaign manager, the government offices have shown that they decide to promote gender equality by publishing the signed article and making special report. Aiming to prohibit discrimination, they made a series of policies on culture and media to the coordinated development between men and women. We protest against the discrimination that the women’ s independent personality is cut down and denied. Hence, the government should monitor the news media and advertisement business operator of self-discipline,moreover,the media’s regulatory need to be improved. Indeed, the media industry should be guided and managed in the right side; the media worker ought to be cultivated; the social gender consciousness need to be enhanced. They trumpeted that women make positive contribution in the development of economic society. Until the end of 2014, the proportion of female news reporters who have the Press card was 44.1% , which means women have played an important role in the field of media.

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