文章衔接手法恰当;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
Someone believes that happiness is the absence of problems. But I insist on the opposite point of view that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. It is difficult that to solve a problem.However,you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy.For example,you try your best to think it when you cannot solve a math problem.Suddenly,you have a new idea to solve it.Therefore,you are happy and your ability to solve math problems have been developed.