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文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。
Someone believes that happiness is the absence of problems. But I insist on the opposite point of view that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. It is difficult that to solve a problem.However,you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy.For example,you try your best to think it when you cannot solve a math problem.Suddenly,you have a new idea to solve it.Therefore,you are happy and your ability to solve math problems have been developed.Of course,you may find it painful that you cannot solve the problem,but you sure that you can sucess when you don't give up. The way to sucess is along with puzzle as well as pain.
