高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；采用了一些简单的从句；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

As the economic development, our country become more richer and the level of life have improved. More and more people have their own cars. Is that good or bad to us, different people have different opinions. The approver think this vehicle make our life becoming more coveniente and comfortable. It also bring the development of other industries. But everything have two sides. On the other hand, the car expel exhaust gas which pollute enviroment. More cars make the transportation difficulty, what is more, sometimes it cause more accident. There would not have eenough parking palce.