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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:15浏览次数:7012
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中考马上要结束了,考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是David,你的美国笔友Fred来信询问考后你想做什么。请给他写封回信,告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情,并说明理由。
注意:1. 60词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息;
3.不要把已给出部分再抄写在答题卡上。


Dear Fred,
I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
_________________________________
Yours,
David
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter.You want to know what I like to do after the exam.Now let me tell you about it. First, I'll read the book that I bought last school term. Because we have a lot of homework to do in these days, I don't have time to read it. It's a pretty interesting book, I can't wait to read it after the exam. Second, I would like to go on a vacation with my family to Qingdao. Qingdao is a beautiful city in Shandong province. There are many kinds of delicious snacks, I want to try the seafood there much. Qingdao is by the side of the sea. I haven't seen sea, so it's my dream to have a look. Then I expect to visit my grandparents in Shanghai. I miss them very much. In a word, I have many things to do in the vocation. It must be a wonderful time for me.I can't wait to spend it. Hope you have a fantastic vacation, too. Yours, Devid

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