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Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter.You want to know what I like to do after the exam.Now let me tell you about it. First, I'll read the book that I bought last school term. Because we have a lot of homework to do in these days, I don't have time to read it. It's a pretty interesting book, I can't wait to read it after the exam. Second, I would like to go on a vacation with my family to Qingdao. Qingdao is a beautiful city in Shandong province. There are many kinds of delicious snacks, I want to try the seafood there much. Qingdao is by the side of the sea. I haven't seen sea, so it's my dream to have a look. Then I expect to visit my grandparents in Shanghai. I miss them very much. In a word, I have many things to do in the vocation. It must be a wonderful time for me.I can't wait to spend it. Hope you have a fantastic vacation, too. Yours, Devid
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