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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3527
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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In many people's mind being adult means you are too old to obtain a degree.Leaning is only for young people.Adult's major job is earning money.So many adults pay more and more attention in pursue money than learn acknowledge.The relationship of money and acknowledge is similar to the fruit and root.Without deep root provide water and mineral how can a tree to provide fruit?Without accumulation of acknowledge how can someone makes big money.Not to say achieving life goal.So in my opinion it is never too late to get a new degree. In modern days earning a new degree is better for your career.In today as the technology developed so quickly.Our knowledge always lay behind the job requirement.If you don't keep up with the trend you will fall behind.For example 8 years ago Nokia is a global brand.Everyone in the world wants a Nokia phone.People never heard Iphone now 8 years later everyone's eye is only Iphone.10 year's old technology is trash in today.Technic changed so much so as the job.If you don't want to lag behind it's better to keep up with the trend.Keep learning new things and prepare for the change. Second in the modern society people dissatisfy about their position.They want to change and find their life meaning.If without another regions acknowledge one can't change.So in order to change their social position and pursue their life meaning they must spend time and energy to learn new things.So get a authorize recognized degree would be good for them.For example if a person want to be a English translator.He or she should better spending time and energy to get a English degree. Above all neither for money or life meaning.It will be helpful to get a new degree.

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