正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Dear David, I'm glad to meet you on the internet. I hope that we can become good friends form now on. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name's Lihua. I live in Shanghai and I am a Junior high school students. In the free time, I like to collect stamps and do sports. I like play basketball the most. How about you? What kind of sports do you like? I have learnt English for three years. I'm interested in English, and I can sing a lot of English songs. Many of my classmates also want to find pen pals on line. They want to get some help from it. It's lucky for me to meet you and I hope you can help me improve my English level. I have a dream that I can go to England one day. I hope to recieve your letter soon. Yours Lihua