2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

When Denver see the appearance of the delicate girl, she knows the girl was her sister reincarnation. Denver is happy because she has a real friend. In the next days: Denver listen to her breathing sound, watch her sleep face. She feels Beloved replace the missing part of love in her life. Denver carefully looks after Beloved, though Paul D thinks she is a devil. Beloved becomes her only secret friend. Denver and she share secrets, they dance tighter in bed, and she enjoys it