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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Gradually, Beloved becomes a terrible existence, she turns in to threaten to the life of Seethe and Denver. When she was a ghost, Beloved and Denver life in a fantasy world and they together play, but finally, she wakes up. Beloved becomes more and more powerful; she forces Seethe to give up her work and life. Denver see it all, she realizes that: if she does not do something, this will go worse. Denver starts to protect Sethe from Beloved, so she decides to leave the year, go out of and house, and ask some people for help. Denver started her first step---leave house to community. The community helps the girl to fix the broken home. Denver experienced a personal loss of independence and reconstruction; she becomes a real independence woman with self-consciousness.
