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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46234
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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