Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Denver has been living in 124 Bluestone ---a house with full of venom.Her two brothers had run away when they were fifteen. Since Suggs dead, nobody came here they did not have visitors, and they did not get any friends. Denver is isolated because all people escaped the house. Sethe and the ghost became her friends.Even for a long time,she pretended to be deaf to escape from the contact with others people and the society. She indulges in her fantasy world. When Denver sees the appearance of the delicate girl, she knows the girl was her sister reincarnation. Denver is happy because she has a real friend. In the next days: Denver listens to her breathing and watches her sleeping face. She feels Beloved replace the missing part of love in her life.