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The campus environment is important of undergraduate so that it is necessary to create a green campus,it is advantage for everyone,so,many colleges have been create a green campus.However,not only that refers to creatimg green building but also academic environment.In order to undergraduate can enjoy better environment,they try them best to create green campus environment. In my view,for the sake of creating a green campus,that isn't one person can complete,it is need everyone's efforts,academician,professor,even whole society.We are learning from campus everyday.At first we should keep it clean,the second,as a undergraduate,we should do what he do and establish a good learning atmosphere.Finally,through everyone's mutual competition. For creating a green campus,we will try our best to do it.