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People nowadays thinks highly of professional certificates, and they are certainly play an increasingly part in our job-seeking. People who are not ever addmitted to colleges or vocatinal schools seem to be strinkingly difficule to find an ideal job. The main season is that they need something like certificate to show their abilities, so that presently people are enthusiastic to various certificate tests, especially college students and the working people. There are several reasons which account for this phenomenon. First and formost, with the rapid developoment of society and higher life standards, the requirement required for modern workers are increased at the same time. They need learn more professinal skills, like computer operational skills, Engilsh written skill, oral expressional skills, even the personal intership skill, to get their jobs. Then, today's world is smaller than ever before with the help of Internet, so that people earn to see and learned from the outside world themselves not just through the Internet. Take students as a example, they need to get the specific conditon to be allowed to study other counties, like TOEFL. Last and formost, some want to be experts in certain areas, so they should study more to earn the reputation by gaining higher position through the evidence of their cerfiticates. In my perspective, we should keep a rational and reasonal mind to treat the certificates when we wnat to gain them. Be clear our future aims and struggle for getting it. Only in this way can it help us benifit from it.