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People nowadays think highly of professional certificates, and they are certainly play an increasingly important part in our job-seeking. People who are not ever addmitted to colleges or vocatinal schools seem to be quite difficult to find an ideal job. The main reason is that they need something like certificates to show their abilities, so that presently people are enthusiastic to take part in various certificate tests, especially college students and the working persons. There are several reasons which account for this phenomenon. First and formost, with the rapid developoment of society and higher life standards, the requirements required for modern workers are increasing at the same time. They need learn more professinal skills, like computer operational skills, Engilsh written skill, communication skills, even the personal intership skill, to get their jobs. Then, today's world is smaller than ever before with the help of Internet, so that people earn to see and learn from the outside world themselves not just through the Internet. Take students as a example, they need to get the specific conditons to be allowed to study at other counties, like TOEFL. Last and formost, some want to be experts in certain areas, so they should study more to earn the reputation by gaining higher position through the evidence of their cerfiticates. In my perspective, we should keep a rational and reasonal mind to treat the certificates when we want to gain them. Be clear our future aims and struggle for getting it. Only in this way can it help us benifit from it.