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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11315
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。

用户练习作文:

As is known in the picture, more and more people use mobile phone almost every moment, even cross the stress. What this cartoon lively reveals is that people nowadays, especially young people are more and more rely on mobile phone. It is helpful for people’s daily life, but also bring some troubles. For one thing, a larger majority people complain about their families and friends often play mobile phone when they’re having dinner. Because chat online, ignore our near persons. I still like the way people communicate face to face. For another thing, when people meet some trouble, they can search on the internet by mobile easily. That make some people don’t like thinking more.It’s terrible. To sum up, mobile phone have made our life more simple, we should use it reasonable.

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